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体育成功的影响因素

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📝 题目

Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

🎯 立场

心理素质更重要

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景体育经理人不断寻求招募最优秀的运动员
  2. 论点一有人认为身体天赋是决定成败的关键
  3. 反方观点也有人认为心理素质更重要,意志力可扭转劣势
  4. 我的观点 / 结论心理韧性与自律胜过身体天赋

✍️ 参考范文

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Since sports have become a big draw, sports managers constantly seek ways to recruit the best athletes to guarantee victory. However, there are opposing views on who to select, as some team managers favor the most physically-gifted athletes, while others believe that an athlete’s frame of mind is more important.

Many people consider the physical attributes of an athlete as the determining factor for success. Their general idea is that the more physical advantages the athletes have, the greater the chances they will succeed - injuries and bad luck aside. This is why both professional and amateur coaches drool over the chance to get the fastest, strongest, tallest, and most-skilled athletes. With such studs on their team, success is practically guaranteed.

However, not everybody agrees that the physically talented competitors always win. There are times when someone who was not as gifted but was mentally tougher won the contest. This is why other sports managers invest more in athletes who are disciplined, dedicated to their craft, and willing to lay it all on the line for glory. Without the right mental attitude, the individual or team will succumb to pressure, losing it all, even if they are supposedly better than their opponents.

Between the two views, I agree with the latter. Although physical attributes can give a slight advantage at the start, the right mental attitude is needed to win it all. There will be plenty of ups and downs in sports, such as injuries, quarrels within the team, and comments from the fans. If athletes are not mentally tough, it will be easy to forget their training and game plan, costing them the win. That is why mental toughness and discipline trump physical giftedness in sports.

📚 精彩词汇

physically-gifted身体天赋出众的
frame of mind心态,心境
determining factor决定性因素
drool over垂涎,渴望
disciplined自律的
dedicated专注的,敬业的
lay it all on the line全力以赴
succumb to pressure屈服于压力
mental toughness心理韧性
trump胜过,压倒

🏗️ 加分结构

Although 引导让步状语从句
Although physical attributes can give a slight advantage at the start, the right mental attitude is needed to win it all.
现在分词短语作结果状语
If athletes are not mentally tough, it will be easy to forget their training and game plan, costing them the win.
That is why 引导表语从句
That is why mental toughness and discipline trump physical giftedness in sports.