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保护动物与关注人类问题

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📝 题目

Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

🎯 立场

优先关注人类的问题

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景大量物种濒临灭绝,保护动物与关注人类问题之争
  2. 论点一动物在生态系统中作用关键,应防止灭绝
  3. 反方观点人类自身问题(犯罪、贫困)影响面更大
  4. 我的观点 / 结论应优先解决影响人类的问题

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Currently, large numbers of animal species are on the verge of ceasing to exist. It is argued that humans should be responsible for protecting animals from extinction, while others believe focusing on issues faced by humans should be of greater concern. I believe that we should primarily concentrate on fixing issues faced by humans.

Animals should be prevented from dying out because they play a vital role in various ecosystems. For example, once a species that another species uses for sustenance goes extinct, the population of that species also decreases because finding food is more difficult. When the extinction of these species continually occurs, human beings who are believed to be at the top of the food chain will eventually face the shortage of food. Therefore, ending practices that directly threaten the survival of certain species will contribute to the well-being of human races.

On the other hand, some issues faced by humans have a larger impact on the world and I believe we should pay more attention to them. Problems like crime and poverty affect a large proportion of world population. Once these problems are addressed, the general population feels much happier because of improved living conditions and safer environment. Conversely, very few people would develop a sense of satisfaction towards life if they have to resort to shabby shelter and contaminated water. In other words, saving more species from dying out would not do good to solving other problems in our society.

Overall, I believe focusing primarily on problems affecting humans will allow the world to become a better place.

📚 精彩词汇

on the verge of处于...的边缘
sustenance食物
threaten the survival of ...威胁...的生存
the well-being of human races人类的福祉
improved living conditions改善的生活条件
develop a sense of satisfaction发展出满足感
resort to依靠
contaminated water受污染的水源

🏗️ 加分结构

once引导的条件状语从句+that引导定语从句
For example, once a species that another species uses for sustenance goes extinct, the population of that species also decreases because finding food is more difficult.
过去分词做后置定语修饰issues
On the other hand, some issues faced by humans have a larger impact on the world and I believe we should pay more attention to them.