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Scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景许多偏远地区成为科学家和游客的目的地
  2. 论点一科学家前往南北极研究气候变化
  3. 论点二旅游方面,偏远地区缺乏基础设施,游客应谨慎
  4. 我的观点 / 结论偏远地区旅行应限于科学目的或慎重进行

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These days, many remote areas have become popular with scientists and tourists. I believe that such trips can be valuable, especially as expeditions for learning, but the trips may also cause unexpected problems, so the advantages probably offset the disadvantages.

Scientists have often visited the North and South Poles in an effort to learn more about our environment. With today’s concerns about global warming, it is necessary for them to visit and gather useful information which can be used to predict the future. For example, by researching and studying the polar ice caps, some of which are located at the South Pole, scientists have been able to confirm that the world is getting warmer, as the ice caps have now been melting more than ever. In gathering this information, it is easier for us to better understand global warming and to predict the effect it could have on all of us.

As for tourism, many of these remote areas are not common tourist spots and tourist attractions and accommodation in those places is often minimal. Whether tourists can adapt to the harsh environment and living conditions is a big question. Meanwhile, we should be aware of the harm tourists can do, consciously or unconsciously, to the vulnerable environment, such as littering and hurting wild animals.

If a person is a scientist or a naturalist who is interested in the natural environment, trips to remote natural areas might be valuable and enjoyable. However, the local environment may be under potential threat if scientific research is not carried out properly or if tourists pollute the environment.

📚 精彩词汇

offset抵消
gather useful information收集有用的信息
polar ice caps极地冰盖
tourist spots景点
harsh environment恶劣的环境
be under potential threat处于潜在的风险之中

🏗️ 加分结构

定语从句做插入语 + that引导宾语从句
For example, by researching and studying the polar ice caps, some of which are located at the South Pole, scientists have been able to confirm that the world is getting warmer...
whether引导主语从句
Whether tourists can adapt to the harsh environment and living conditions is a big question.