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儿童犯错的自由与管控

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📝 题目

Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

🎯 立场

孩子能通过犯错学到更多,但成年人有时也需要作出干涉,防止孩子犯严重错误致代价沉重

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景育儿没有标准答案,父母管教孩子的方式各不相同
  2. 论点一有人认为孩子从错误中能学到更多,不应过多干预
  3. 论点二也有人认为大人应帮助孩子避免犯错,防患于未然
  4. 我的观点 / 结论两种方式应结合:让孩子在试错中成长,同时给予必要引导

✍️ 参考范文

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Most people know that raising children well is not an exact science, which is why parents have different ways of rearing kids. Some believe children should be able to make their own mistakes to learn. Others, however, think it best that adults help children avoid errors.

The common belief is that people learn more from their mistakes than their successes. So many believe that if children can make their own mistakes at home and school, they will learn from these failures more than if their parents and teachers prevented them from doing so.

Moreover, in their view, children become emotionally stronger when they can recover from the many setbacks they encounter. Thus, for them, children should have this freedom.

Contrarily, others insist that it is the job of adults to help children avoid errors. Sometimes, when children experience setbacks, their self-confidence is affected. Rather than make mistakes, these adults think children should learn how to spot and avoid them.

Additionally, such adults know that some mistakes are physically harmful. When left to their own devices, children could get burned, cut, or electrocuted. So these parents believe close supervision is necessary.

In my view, a combination of the two positions is necessary. Children will indeed learn a lot when they recover from their mistakes. They will grow stronger within and become better at making decisions. But adults must also be around to prevent costly mistakes that could hurt the children or others. It is not true that people must always experience something before they learn, as big blunders often come with painful consequences. Therefore, it is a blend of the two views that is best.

📚 精彩词汇

avoid errors避免差错
recover from恢复
setbacks挫折
physically harmful对身体有害的
left to their own devices放任他们不管
close supervision严密监督
big blunders大错

🏗️ 加分结构

So many believe that宾语从句+ if条件状语从句
So many believe that if children can make their own mistakes at home and school, they will learn from these failures more than if their parents and teachers prevented them from doing so.
When + 过去分词... 被动语态省略句型
When left to their own devices, children could get burned, cut, or electrocuted.
It is not true that... 系表结构+主语从句
It is not true that people must always experience something before they learn, as big blunders often come with painful consequences.