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名人助力国际援助的影响

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📝 题目

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

🎯 立场

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💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景国际慈善机构面临筹款压力,名人参与常见
  2. 论点一名人影响力能唤起公众关注、吸引捐款
  3. 反方观点也有人认为名人效应会分散对问题本身的关注
  4. 我的观点 / 结论没有名人参与,公众对国际问题知之甚少

✍️ 参考范文

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International charities are under constant pressure to raise money. With many organizations competing for donations, enlisting the help of celebrities has become a popular way to increase people’s awareness of certain problems. I think this strategy has the potential to be effective.

There is no doubt that celebrities such as famous singers or sports stars are in a unique position. If a music group such as the legendary Irish rock band U2 wants to turn the spotlight on the plight of drought-stricken countries or the destruction of the rainforests for example, they will have a much better chance of achieving this and securing support than a politician would. If U2 is willing to perform a benefit concert to promote a cause, not only will the concert sell out immediately, but there will also be widespread media coverage of both the story and the cause.

Some people maintain that celebrities detract from the problem, as members of the public may then tend to focus on the celebrities instead of the issue at hand. Fans attending a benefit concert may be oblivious to the fact that the proceeds of the event will be donated to a particular charity. In this case, the objective of making people more conscious of the situation has clearly not been achieved. Still, the fact remains that at least the charity has succeeded in raising some much-needed funds.

In conclusion, without the involvement of celebrities, people would be ill-informed about many different issues which deserve attention today. If celebrities are sincere in aiding the cause, the positive effects of their support will outweigh the negatives.

📚 精彩词汇

be under pressure在压力下
drought-stricken countries遭旱灾的国家
secure support获得支持
sell out卖完
widespread media coverage广泛的媒体报道
detract from减损
be oblivious to没意识到

🏗️ 加分结构

现在分词短语作主语
With many organizations competing for donations, enlisting the help of celebrities has become a popular way to increase people’s awareness of certain problems.
not only引出倒装句
If U2 is willing to perform a benefit concert to promote a cause, not only will the concert sell out immediately, but there will also be widespread media coverage of both the story and the cause.
as 引导的原因状语从句
Some people maintain that celebrities detract from the problem, as members of the public may then tend to focus on the celebrities instead of the issue at hand.