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在线教育的利弊分析

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📝 题目

Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

🎯 立场

在线教育利小于弊

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一打破地域限制
  2. 论点二上课时间更灵活
  3. 论点三缺乏社交互动影响学习,比如不一定能及时得到老师帮助,不能高效进行小组讨论/完成小组作业
  4. 论点四不适合自律性差的学生

✍️ 参考范文

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Although I understand the advantages of distance learning, I maintain that the disadvantages may have more impact on the learning process than the advantages in some cases.

Not all people live near colleges or universities that offer courses in their desired field of study. With this in mind, online learning can eliminate geographical limitations in education.

Also, some students who are looking to earn degrees are working full time, so they might not have a schedule which is flexible enough to allow for traditional classroom learning. If they take classes online, they will be able to study after work or during weekends.

Besides, learning materials and instruction can actually be obtained online at any time. For instance, most distance learning programs allow students to view video lessons on the school’s website whenever they have time for it.

Nonetheless, the disadvantages should not be ignored. First, the lack of social interaction may affect the efficiency of learning. For those who need immediate assistance on academic studies, they will receive a timely response in the classroom rather than wait for 24 hours or longer till their teachers have time to reply through email. Group discussions or group projects may heavily rely on emails or phone calls, which could lead to misunderstanding due to insufficient communication.

Second, students may not be as strictly supervised as those attending offline courses. As a result, those who are less disciplined would probably fail to keep track of their course work and assignments, thus cramming for exams on the very last day.

In conclusion, although distance learning is known for flexibility, it does not necessarily suit all types of students. It is generally a poor option for students who are less-motivated or are not used to communicating through emails or other forms of e-communication.

📚 精彩词汇

eliminate geographical limitations移除地理限制
the lack of social interaction缺乏互动
a timely response及时的回复
offline courses线下课程
less disciplined较不自律的
keep track of记录
cram for临时抱佛脚

🏗️ 加分结构

thus +后置定语
As a result, those who are less disciplined would probably fail to keep track of their course work and assignments, thus cramming for exams on the very last day.
who引导的定语从句 + till 引导的时间状语从句
For those who need immediate assistance on academic studies, they will receive a timely response in the classroom rather than wait for 24 hours or longer till their teachers have time to reply through email.