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📝 题目

Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open spaces in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🎯 立场

只有两者兼顾,真正留下更多人才,同时让现有居民更愿意长居。

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景城市空间紧张,绿地与住房需求竞争
  2. 论点一绿地造福社区:产氧、降温、休闲
  3. 论点二城市也需要更多住房
  4. 我的观点 / 结论规划者应寻求绿地与住房的平衡

✍️ 参考范文

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In many towns and cities, space is at a premium. While some see such spaces as an opportunity to provide additional housing for potential residents, others believe it is more prudent to transform such areas into green spaces for the overall welfare of the majority. In my view, striking an appropriate balance between both ideas is the key to successful urban planning.

Green spaces undoubtedly benefit the surrounding communities. Not only do trees produce oxygen and help reduce air pollution, but parks and gardens also provide local residents with a peaceful refuge away from the hustle and bustle of modern life. These are places where individuals can go for a stroll or just relax with a book on a sunny afternoon. Research has shown that spending time outside in a natural environment has a positive impact on both our physical and mental well-being. And sadly, such opportunities are often absent in many urban areas, making additional green spaces a necessity today.

That said, many towns and cities also need more houses and apartments for people to live in. Because of opportunities and the general allure of city life, more and more people have flooded into urban areas. However, the lack of housing drives rental and mortgage prices up, making it difficult to live a decent life. Two common results of unaffordable housing include poor living conditions, as several people may choose to live together despite inadequate facilities, and productivity issues because of the long commutes for people who must reside outside the city since they cannot afford to live closer to work.

In my opinion, city planners should find an acceptable balance because modern communities need both. Prioritizing one over the other just leads to more problems overall. Thankfully, it is possible to do both if city planners will just get their act together. There are many progressive cities today that have adequate housing while ensuring much greenery. So rather than debating, city planners should begin studying these modern examples to improve their communities.

📚 精彩词汇

at a premium非常珍贵
strike an appropriate balance达到适度的平衡
hustle and bustle忙碌
necessity必需品
mortgage抵押贷款
flood into涌入
prioritize优先处理
lead to导致
greenery绿植,植被

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Not only do trees produce oxygen and help reduce air pollution, but parks and gardens also provide local residents with a peaceful refuge away from the hustle and bustle of modern life. making ... 现在分词做状语 And sadly, such opportunities are often absent in many urban areas, making additional green spaces a necessity today.