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📝 题目

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

🎯 立场

利大于弊

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一有利于孩子形成正确价值观。
  2. 论点二家庭纽带会得到加强。
  3. 论点三仍在传统学校上学的学生也会因为班级规模小而受益。

✍️ 参考范文

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In certain countries, there has been a rise in the number of children being homeschooled, even before the Covid-19 pandemic. And even if the pandemic should end soon, many parents state they will continue homeschooling as it is better than a traditional school. In my view, I think the benefits of this trend outweigh the negatives.

Many in society are currently lamenting the lack of values among the youth. Though adept at technology, children are disrespectful and very worldly because they lack value formation at school and home. But in homeschool, parents can observe and teach their children these values, something that teachers struggle with due to too many students and lack of time. The result may be better-mannered and caring young people, not the rude and apathetic ones we have now.

Next, homeschooling helps strengthen family bonds. This is another big issue in society caused by busyness at work and school. Unfortunately, as children grow up without a meaningful relationship with their parents, this somehow disrupts their relationships at work or with friends. Homeschooling, however, can address this as children can have more time with their siblings and at least one parent, hopefully translating to people who value relationships.

Lastly, this homeschooling trend also benefits students who are still in regular school. If more and more parents opt to homeschool their children, the class sizes in schools will shrink, allowing teachers to better supervise the students. The values formation may still not be the same as homeschooling, but at least there may be a higher chance that students will come out more reformed than when classrooms were packed.

To conclude, a shift toward homeschooling should not be viewed negatively. It simply means that more and more children will be receiving the focus and attention of their parents, something that families and society really need.

📚 精彩词汇

lament对…感到悲痛
adept熟练的
apathetic冷漠的
translating to转化成
a shift toward转向

🏗️ 加分结构

lAs引导的原因状语从句
many parents state they will continue homeschooling as it is better than a traditional school. l现在分词作状语 the class sizes in schools will shrink, allowing teachers to better supervise the students. with their siblings and at least one parent, hopefully translating to people who value relationships. lThat引导的同位语从句 but at least there may be a higher chance that students will come out more reformed than when classrooms were packed.