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年轻人离开家乡的发展影响

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📝 题目

Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

🎯 立场

弊大于利

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一城市有更多的机会,因为大公司和顶尖学校多在城市。
  2. 论点二年轻人被城市的生活方式所吸引。
  3. 论点三城市人口过剩使生活条件变得更糟。
  4. 论点四由于缺乏人口,农村的经济受到了影响。

✍️ 参考范文

(286 words)

In many places, young people from the countryside head to different cities to either work or study. While everyone has the freedom to choose where they would like to be, some people are concerned about how this constant exodus may affect society.

Perhaps the top reason why this phenomenon is happening is because of the many opportunities in the city. Big corporations are usually in the city because of the large customer base and readily available workforce. Consequently, the best universities are also there because of the job opportunities for graduates and potential students. Thus, many young people from rural areas migrate to the city to study and earn a living.

The other reason for leaving is the lifestyle. Young people today are highly attracted to the buzz of city life. They, too, want to mingle with those in high society, see the attractions, and have access to the many amenities.

Although young people get the chance to fulfill their life goals by moving to the city, unfortunately, this mass exodus of young people negatively affects life in the city, mainly because of overpopulation. As the population keeps growing, the living conditions become worse. Traffic congestion and crime are among the side-effects. This migration also impacts the countryside. Because of the dwindling labor pool, companies are hesitant to invest in the rural areas as they fear operations will not be sustained. The lack of opportunities hurts the local economy and causes even more young people to try their luck in the city.

To conclude, young people are attracted to city life because of what they believe they will receive when they get there. But this trend is badly affecting both the cities and the rural areas.

📚 精彩词汇

exodus大批离开
migrate迁移
buzz of city life城市生活的活跃气氛
high society上流社会
dwindling逐渐减少的
try one's luck碰运气

🏗️ 加分结构

How引导的宾语从句
… some people are concerned about how this constant exodus may affect society.
Although引导的让步状语从句
Although young people get the chance to fulfill their life goals by moving to the city, unfortunately, this mass exodus of young people...
As引导的原因状语从句
...hesitant to invest in the rural areas as they fear operations will not be sustained.