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提高法定驾驶年龄的影响

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📝 题目

Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一一个人的成熟度取决于多重因素,年龄只是其中一个
  2. 论点二司机的驾驶技术也会影响道路安全
  3. 论点三提升改善驾校的培训更有用

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Every year, road mishaps and other occurrences shock and sadden the commuting public. Because of these incidences, some suggest that increasing the minimum legal age to drive a vehicle is the best way to improve safety on the roads. However, I disagree with their statement.

One problem with the idea is that a person’s maturity depends on a number of factors, where age is just a small part. Though we should not hand the keys to someone under sixteen, we also cannot say that a 20-year-old or even 25-year-old is mature enough to drive. In fact, people as old as 30 are sometimes racing down the streets or drinking and driving. Thus, assuming that an increased legal age for driving is the best solution is wrong.

Next, even if a person is deemed mature enough to drive, the question is whether a person really knows how to drive. Sadly, some people learn how to drive from family or friends who may be licensed to drive but not necessarily licensed to teach. So, while a new driver might know the basics of handling a car or motorcycle, he or she might still not be fully equipped to deal with the complexities of driving on a busy highway or navigating through narrow roads with pedestrians walking alongside their vehicle. Instead of just increasing the age and declaring it to be enough, it would be more effective to enhance driving schools in the country to ensure that new drivers are adequately prepared to operate a vehicle.

To sum up, it is clear that increasing the minimum legal age for driving is not the best solution to the road safety problem. Addressing driver’s education is the better solution since it helps ensure that new drivers are ready to drive. Hopefully, lawmakers will consider the merits of enhancing driving schools in their areas to improve road safety.

📚 精彩词汇

maturity成熟
drinking and driving酒后驾车
know the basics了解基础知识
be fully equipped to为...做好充分准备
be adequately prepared to充足地准备
complexities复杂性
pedestrians行人
declare宣布
lawmakers立法者
merits优点

🏗️ 加分结构

assuming that引导让步状语从句
Thus, assuming that an increased legal age for driving is the best solution is wrong.
Though 引导让步状语从句,we also cannot say that 引导宾语从句
Though we should not hand the keys to someone under sixteen, we also cannot say that a 20-year-old or even 25-year-old is mature enough to drive.
the question is + 名词性从句
Next, even if a person is deemed mature enough to drive, the question is whether a person really knows how to drive.