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政府环保与医疗的侧重

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📝 题目

Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🎯 立场

政府应该纵观社会问题,同时决定哪些问题需要优先解决

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一如果环境问题不解决,势必会导致疾病
  2. 论点二环境污染解决后,政府相关医疗支出也能下降
  3. 论点三住房问题不解决,同样会导致疾病的传播
  4. 论点四每一个政府都有很多需要解决的问题,优先级很重要

✍️ 参考范文

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It is argued that governments should prioritise reducing pollution and housing issues to combat public health issues. I partly agree that governments should focus on these problems as other important issues need to be addressed as well.

Environmental pollution is a leading cause of detrimental effects on health and long-term sickness. Focusing on the reduction of environmental pollution helps reduce the medical burden on the government and also improves the wellbeing of people. For example, studies from Japan have shown that people in less-polluted areas are more likely to have a longer life span than those living close to factories or nuclear plants. Countries that are not suffering from environmental pollution on a large scale usually have a lower cost on maintaining public health. Meanwhile, the shortage of quality housing can result in similar health problems and concerns, as adults who are homeless or children living in the ghetto are certainly more prone to disease and illness.

Nonetheless, over-allocating the government's resources to those two issues has negative consequences for different areas of society. Highly-developed infrastructure and education are critical to a strong economy and neglecting these in favour of citizens’ general health will not benefit our society.

Also, providing citizens with a first-rate education helps develop critical industries that make a society internationally competitive. In contrast, if a country is full of healthy but undereducated people, the economy will not grow strong.

In conclusion, focusing on environmental protection and housing is essential for public health. However, other crucial areas like education and infrastructure must also be funded as they have a positive impact on the public.

📚 精彩词汇

a longer life span更长的寿命
suffer from遭受
on a large scale大范围的
maintain public health维护公共卫生
in the ghetto在贫民区
be prone to易于
in favour of支持

🏗️ 加分结构

...is a leading cause of... 是...的主要原因
Environmental pollution is a leading cause of detrimental effects on health and long-term sickness.
现在分词短语作主语
Focusing on the reduction of environmental pollution helps reduce the medical burden on the government and also improves the wellbeing of people.
if 引导的条件状语
In contrast, if a country is full of healthy but undereducated people, the economy will not grow strong.