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晚育的原因及发展影响

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📝 题目

In some countries men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

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负面影响为主

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景现代人越来越晚生育,我认为这总体是消极的
  2. 论点一晚育的主要原因是抚养孩子成本高昂,需先积累经济基础
  3. 论点二晚育虽能减缓人口增长、让父母更成熟,但带来生育风险
  4. 我的观点 / 结论经济因素是主因,晚育长期来看负面影响更多

✍️ 参考范文

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Men and women tend to start parenting late in life these days due to various reasons. I think this development is negative to a large extent despite some positive impacts.

One of the most prominent reasons is the high cost of raising a child. In order to provide a well-rounded education to a child these days, the spending never ends. The money spent on general education and medicine may be just a small part as other costs, such as fees for attending extracurricular activities, academic tutoring as well as overseas travel expenses, will quickly add up. Due to such heavy financial pressure, it is understandable that a number of couples choose to wait till middle age.

In addition, some women seek more education to establish themselves in jobs and careers. They simply expect to be financially independent before having their children, which is a clear incentive for delaying.

Although late childbirth can slow down the growth of population and enable parents to create a better living condition for their offspring, this phenomenon has negative impacts in many aspects. A direct influence is the increase of aging population which may lead to a shortage of workforce.

Furthermore, the financial burden of taking care of the elderly will become a problem for both the government and young adults. From the perspective of health and safety, women may suffer from high-risk pregnancy if they choose to have a child in their 40s or at an older age.

In conclusion, financial factors mainly contribute to older parenthood. This trend will bring more negative influences to societies in the long run.

📚 精彩词汇

well-rounded education全面发展的教育
extracurricular activities课外活动
add up累加
be financially independent经济独立的
slow down减速
a shortage of workforce劳动力短缺
suffer from遭受

🏗️ 加分结构

one of the most prominent reasons is...最突出的原因之一是...
One of the most prominent reasons is the high cost of raising a child.
it is understandable that…这是可以理解的…
Due to such heavy financial pressure, it is understandable that a number of couples choose to wait till middle age.
from the perspective of... 从...的角度来看
From the perspective of health and safety, women may suffer from high-risk pregnancy if they choose to have a child in their 40s or at an older age.