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有害食品的销售管控

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📝 题目

Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has scientifically been proved to have bad effects on people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🎯 立场

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💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景有人认为应禁止商店销售有害食品饮料
  2. 论点一酒精、能量饮料、快餐确实危害健康
  3. 论点二多数产品上市前已通过安全检验,风险可控
  4. 我的观点 / 结论有害食品的负面影响有限,不必全面禁止

✍️ 参考范文

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Some people think that stores should be prohibited from selling any food or drink that is proved to be harmful to people. I disagree with this opinion to a large extent.

There is no doubt that some food and drinks, such as alcohol, energy drinks and fast foods, can be harmful to a person’s health. However, the harm usually occurs when these foods are either over-consumed at one time or consumed regularly. Wine, as a kind of alcohol, is proved to be beneficial to heart health when consumed in moderation. So there is no reason to ignore the benefits and only worry about the health risks caused by irresponsible consumption of these food and drinks.

Furthermore, before products are allowed to be sold in shops, most of those products have already received safety approval from governments to make sure the products do not contain toxins, contaminants, or cancer-causing agents. Many products nowadays are required to contain labels which list contents, possible side effects, or health warnings. Often these warnings are in regard to overuse, over-consumption, misuse or abuse. After the government deems products safe for sale on the market, it becomes the responsibility of the consumer to choose and use those products responsibly.

Although some foods and drinks can have negative health effects, those negative effects are almost always related to overuse or misuse. Ultimately, it should be the responsibility of the consumer to use the product as recommended. Additional rules and regulations to prohibit food and drink sales are unnecessary in this case.

📚 精彩词汇

irresponsible consumption不负责任的消费
safety approval安全认证
be consumed in moderation有节制地饮用
possible side effects潜在的副作用
health warnings健康警示语
in regard to关于
overuse, over-consumption, misuse or abuse过度使用或滥用

🏗️ 加分结构

插入语修饰wine + when 引导的条件状语从句省略主谓
Wine, as a kind of alcohol, is proved to be beneficial to heart health when consumed in moderation.
which引导定语从句
Many products nowadays are required to contain labels which list contents, possible side effects, or health warnings.