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电脑作为重要发明的定位

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📝 题目

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

🎯 立场

支持电脑为最重要发明

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景计算机常被视为上个世纪最重要的发明
  2. 论点一计算机的计算与存储能力极大方便了人们的工作与生活
  3. 论点二计算机是众多其他现代发明的基础,推动各领域进步
  4. 我的观点 / 结论计算机配得上「最重要发明」的称号

✍️ 参考范文

(285 words)

Despite problems such as global warming and overpopulation, most people readily agree that the living conditions of humankind have greatly improved over the last one hundred years because of an assortment of useful inventions. Among these, the computer is often touted to be the most significant innovation, and that is something I also believe.

The computer as a tool in itself has made people’s daily lives so much easier. Its computing power and data storage capacity make it a necessity in work and school. Without it, life would be harder as we would still need to record everything onto sheets of paper, do manual computations on our own, and basically be limited by our finite intellect. But with it, ordinary people can perform a multitude of things because of its many capabilities.

Moreover, the computer has been an integral part of nearly all the other recent inventions that have improved people’s lives. Life-saving medicines exist because scientists can easily analyze diseases and extrapolate possibilities using their computers. Smart technology is “smart” due to the computing power within. Even the fields of archaeology, literature, music, and sports have been improved because of what the computer can do. Thus, regardless of whatever contraption that has come about in the last century, the computer has played a significant role in that invention’s existence.

In summary, society’s progress has grown exponentially because of the many functions of the computer. It has helped people in the past; it is helping people now, and it will continue to help humankind for centuries to come. This is why it deserves recognition as the most significant invention of the last one hundred years.

📚 精彩词汇

innovation创新
finite intellect有限的智力
multitude of许多的
extrapolate推断
contraption精巧的设计
exponentially以指数方式

🏗️ 加分结构

that引导的定语从句
...all the other recent inventions that have improved people’s lives. 介词结构做状语 Without it, life would be harder as we would still need to record everything... Regardless of引导让步成分,that引导定语从句 Thus, regardless of whatever contraption that has come about in the last century, the computer has played a significant role... Why引导的表语从句 This is why it deserves recognition as the most significant invention of the last one hundred years.