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📝 题目

Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

🎯 立场

线上取代线下商店很可能是消极发展

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一从不同线上渠道货比三家
  2. 论点二足不出户,即可收到商品
  3. 论点三网上价格更具竞争力
  4. 论点四导致线下店关门,失业率增加。
  5. 论点五门槛低,竞争更激励
  6. 论点六通过近距离观察,触摸,更清晰的判断是否值得购买

✍️ 参考范文

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In many instances, online shopping is now replacing traditional store shopping which is viewed positively and negatively. Although the benefits of online shopping are indeed understandable, it is my feeling that replacing in-store shopping will ultimately be a negative development.

On the one hand, the comfort offered by online shopping is obvious. Firstly, people can read reviews on the items they wish to purchase and can compare prices from a variety of source online.

Furthermore, consumers can order and receive products, often at prices which are similar or lower than retail outlets, without even leaving their homes. Therefore, the convenience of online shopping is evident.

On the other hand, online stores are causing traditional stores to close, and this is leading to job losses. The low barriers to entry in creating an e-commerce store are making it difficult for retailers to compete. For example, the amount of bookstores closing in the US is directly due to online competition. Therefore, the rise in online shopping is causing massive amounts of stores to close which is a negative development.

Additionally, retail stores offer advantages that are unmatched by e-commerce sites. Importantly, retail stores provide a hands-on approach that allows people to touch, feel, and demonstrate the product. For example, if a person is interested in purchasing a smartphone and they are not sure how it works, a salesperson can assist them, leading to positive customer experiences. By contrast, ordering online means that customers do not have exposure to the goods and may often be disappointed with the quality which degrades the customer experience.

In conclusion, there are valid reasons why online shopping is positive. But I believe that the job losses caused by online shopping and the lack of customer experience it offers, mean that it is overall an unfavorable development in shopping.

📚 精彩词汇

retail outlets零售店
low barriers to entry低门槛
an e-commerce store电子商店
a hands-on approach亲身体验的途径
degrades the customer experience降低顾客体验
an unfavorable development一个不利的发展

🏗️ 加分结构

that引导定语从句
Importantly, retail stores provide a hands-on approach that allows people to touch, feel, and demonstrate the product.
现在分词做后置定语
For example, if a person is interested in purchasing a smartphone and they are not sure how it works, a salesperson can assist them, leading to positive customer experiences.