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财富差距与社会幸福感

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📝 题目

Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between its richest and poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🎯 立场

反对

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一人们会拒绝从事一些不起眼、工作条件艰苦的工作,影响社会运转
  2. 论点二对于有特别技能和天赋的人不公平,影响社会进步、发展
  3. 论点三应该有针对性的改善提升人们幸福指数的领域
  4. 论点四应该提供人们发挥自己长项的机会,这样才能真正提升生活的幸福指数

✍️ 参考范文

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Leaders in nearly every society try to make their constituents happy. One prevailing idea is to ensure minimal differences between its wealthiest and poorest citizens. In my view, though leaders should aim to lessen the gap, ensuring there are only small differences is impossible to achieve.

If nearly everyone had the same income level and status, no one would be willing to do the menial jobs which are still needed for a society to function well. Occupations such as garbage collectors, plumbers, and even pest controllers would become vacant because these involve risks and working in unpleasant conditions.

Furthermore, it would be grossly unfair to those with talents and skills to have the same status as those who are not gifted, which is why this idea would backfire. If neurosurgeons, for example, received nearly the same compensation as gardeners, people could become disincentivized to pour in so much time and effort to master such a complicated profession. Society would then suffer because it would lack the highly skilled professionals it needs to serve the community well.

To be clear, I am not saying leaders should not try to lessen the wealth gap. People in need should receive relief and opportunities to improve their lives. However, attempting to zero out the differences will lead to more problems. Rather than trying to equalize everyone, leaders should provide what people, rich and poor, need to be happy, such as improved security, better transportation, and equal access to quality education and good-paying jobs.

To conclude, though it may seem ideal to minimize the wealth gap so that there are barely any differences between the rich and poor, such would cause more issues. Leaders should still do their part to help those below the poverty line, but there should be an effort to improve the aspects of society that benefit all and give everyone a chance to do well in life.That would be the better solution for making life happier for everyone.

📚 精彩词汇

constituents选民,公民
prevailing idea主流观点
menial jobs卑微的工作
vacant空缺的
grossly unfair极不公平的
disincentivized失去动力的
master掌握,精通
relief救济
zero out归零
equal access平等机会

🏗️ 加分结构

If 引导虚拟条件句
If nearly everyone had the same income level and status, no one would be willing to do the menial jobs which are still needed for a society to function well.
定语从句
Society would then suffer because it would lack the highly skilled professionals it needs to serve the community well.
Though 引导让步状语从句
Though it may seem ideal to minimize the wealth gap, ensuring there are only small differences is impossible to achieve.