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违法者的惩处方式选择

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📝 题目

Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

🎯 立场

不同意用工作替代对高智商犯人的囚禁惩罚。

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景监禁已成为世界普遍的刑罚方式,我认为其有效
  2. 论点一违法者应入狱:剥夺自由能震慑潜在罪犯
  3. 反方观点让有才能的违法者工作服刑也有好处:贡献社会、节省开支
  4. 我的观点 / 结论法律维护社会秩序,入狱仍是必要选择

✍️ 参考范文

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Incarceration as a form of criminal punishment has become widespread around the world in the last few centuries. I think imprisonment is an effective way of punishing wrongdoers and there is no reason to consider alternative approaches.

People who have broken the law should be sent to prison. Even if some criminals have outstanding talents in certain fields, it does not mean that they should be exempt from harsh punishment, especially those who have committed serious crimes. Depriving prisoners of their freedom can also act as a deterrent to other would-be offenders who may think twice before making the wrong decision.

Allowing talented lawbreakers to work rather than locking them up could offer some potential advantages, such as providing these people with an opportunity to make a positive contribution. For instance, those who are well-educated can be made to do work in their fields of expertise, which is a far more meaningful way for them to pay their debt to society.

Moreover, keeping prisoners behind bars is expensive as prison systems are largely funded by taxpayers. Many of these tax dollars can be saved if the number of inmates is reduced.

In my opinion, laws are in place to maintain social order and justice. It seems discriminatory and irresponsible to treat criminals differently based on their abilities or educational backgrounds.

In addition, it sends the completely wrong message to aspiring criminals, indicating that they can have little to fear from the justice system as they will never receive a prison sentence. In conclusion, I believe that prison sentences need to be fair to everyone, regardless of their talents or levels of intelligence.

📚 精彩词汇

be exempt from被免除于
commit serious crimes犯重罪
deprive of剥夺
act as a deterrent起到威慑作用
think twice再三考虑
lock up关起来
keep prisoners behind bars把犯人关在牢里

🏗️ 加分结构

there is no reason to没有理由...
I think imprisonment is an effective way of punishing wrongdoers and there is no reason to consider alternative approaches.
现在分词短语作主语
Depriving prisoners of their freedom can also act as a deterrent to other would-be offenders who may think twice before making the wrong decision.
which 引导的非限制性定语从句
For instance, those who are well-educated can be made to do work in their fields of expertise, which is a far more meaningful way for them to pay their debt to society.