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食品长途运输的影响

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📝 题目

Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

🎯 立场

排斥外来食品,弊大于利

💡 论点提纲

  1. 引入背景食品经常长途运输后才到达消费者手中
  2. 论点一食用本地食品好处多:支持本地经济、更新鲜
  3. 反方观点并非所有食品都能本地生产:气候、季节限制
  4. 我的观点 / 结论应尽可能选择本地食品,同时接受必要的进口

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Nowadays, food is sometimes transported long distances before finally reaching consumers. While some people appreciate the variety and choices that this brings, others think it would be more beneficial to only patronize food produced locally. In my opinion, excluding food from other areas is not a wise idea as it would hurt more than help.

There are many advantages to eating locally produced foods. When people do so, they support local farmers and food producers, helping ensure they earn a sufficient living.

Also, food that is produced and then consumed locally is often of higher quality than food that is imported from other areas, as it is fresher.

Moreover, because of the closer proximity to consumers, there will be lower gas emissions since delivery trucks travel shorter distances.

Nevertheless, not all foods can be produced locally. Factors such as climate, growing seasons, and soil content may prohibit certain produce from being grown locally. For example, vitamin-rich tropical fruits like pineapples and bananas will not grow in colder climates.

Furthermore, food producers want to earn as much as they can. However, restricting consumption to only locally produced food would reduce the earning potential of farmers and lead to a lot of wastage because of oversupply.

To conclude, there is no doubt that we should buy and consume local foods whenever available, but we should also realize that some of the foods we enjoy cannot be produced locally, and restricting fair trade just hurts the farmers. Thus, consuming foods from other areas makes the most sense.

📚 精彩词汇

patronize优待
ensure确保
earn a living谋生
produce农产品
restrict限制
wastage浪费
make sense合理

🏗️ 加分结构

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When people do so, they support local farmers and food producers, helping ensure they earn a sufficient living.
that引导定语从句+ as 引导原因状语从句
Also, food that is produced and then consumed locally is often of higher quality than food that is imported from other areas, as it is fresher.
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Factors such as climate, growing seasons, and soil content may prohibit items from being grown locally.