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高中毕业后间隔年的影响

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📝 题目

In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

🎯 立场

利弊皆有,因人而异

💡 论点提纲

  1. 论点一挣学费
  2. 论点二调整心态
  3. 论点三从旅游和工作中增长见识,找到自己真正感兴趣的专业方向
  4. 论点四很多人可能迟迟不愿上大学
  5. 论点五为了眼前的收入,放弃到大学深造

✍️ 参考范文

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There are advantages and disadvantages in terms of travelling or working for a year before going to university. A student should consider the positives and negatives of such a decision before deciding whether to do that or not.

Those who decide to work for a while before entering university might be able to earn some money to help offset university costs and expenses. These young people might really enjoy the break from studying and then return much more refreshed and ready to attend university.

More importantly, it is possible that the travel or work experiences might help them with their university studies, either by giving them additional life experiences to draw on or giving them additional perspective and focus on what they want to accomplish at the university and beyond.

There are also negative aspects. If one is not strongly motivated, they may never make the effort to resume school. Or, if one is working, they may grow accustomed to the salary they earn with that job and they may decide to forego further education in favor of their regular paychecks, even if they know that they might deserve a higher salary or have a more rewarding career with a university degree.

It is understandable why some young people are interested to take a break between high school and university. Such a break offers an opportunity for that young person to experience the world, either through work or travel. However, these students should fully consider the possible negatives related to a gap year before they make the decision.

📚 精彩词汇

offset university costs and expenses抵消大学开支
more refreshed and ready更加神清气爽
additional perspective更多视角
forego further education停止进一步的学习
regular paychecks薪水
a more rewarding career更有前途的事业

🏗️ 加分结构

It做形式主语 + either...or... + what引导的宾语从句
More importantly, it is possible that the travel or work experiences might help them with their university studies, either by giving them additional life experiences to draw on or giving them additional perspective and focus on what they want to accomplish at the university and beyond.
过去分词做后置定语修饰negatives
However, these students should fully consider the possible negatives related to a gap year before they make the decision.